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Rhetorical termProcatalepsisRaising an objection to your own argument so you can answer it before the reader gets there.

Raising an objection only to answer it, the sentence leaves nobody standing on the other side of the argument. Ask who actually holds the position; if the honest answer is nobody, the objection was built to be knocked down.

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Written by a model

Some might argue a folding chair should not have to survive a storm. Mine came home from four campsites without a wobble, and the last one flattened the tent beside it.
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Before

Some might argue that a four-day week costs a company output. In practice, the teams that tried it shipped the same amount of work in less time.

After

The teams that moved to a four-day week shipped the same work in less time, and their own managers had expected output to fall.

Try it on your own writing

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How to spot it

Ask who holds the position being answered. That is the test, and it costs one more reading of the sentence. The shape is easy enough to see: a sentence grants a doubt, then the writer turns and settles it. Some might argue the schedule was too tight. It's tempting to think the first build was fine. Conventional wisdom says a smaller team moves faster. Each of those opens a door for somebody, and the only question worth asking is whether anybody walks through it.

So go looking for the objector. Sometimes a name sits right there in the paragraph. More often the belief is common enough that the writer can point at where it lives: a policy everyone has read, a complaint the last three reviews made, a thing the reader was two seconds from thinking. Any of those answers the question. The test fails on a doubt with no address, raised in one clause and finished in the next, where the answer was on the page before the objection was.

The second signal is what the answer costs. Honest anticipation gives something up. The writer concedes a piece of the objection, or admits the rebuttal only goes so far, or names what would have to be true for the other side to win. A reflex costs nothing. The doubt arrives at exactly the size the answer can handle, it is settled before the paragraph ends, and nothing in the argument has moved.

Why models overdo it

The question a model answers at the next sentence differs from a writer's. Not what does my reader actually believe, but what usually comes next here, and after a confident claim what usually comes next is a hedge that sounds fair-minded. The opening is cheap. It buys the tone of someone who has weighed the other side, without the work of going and finding out what the other side says.

There is no cost waiting at the far end either. A writer who invents an objector can be caught by a reader who knows the subject, and that risk is most of what keeps the honest version honest. A model will not meet that reader. So the objection gets built to fit the answer already waiting for it: small enough to lose, close enough to the claim to look relevant, vague enough that nobody can check who ever said it.

What comes out reads as balance and works as its opposite. Every sentence is well formed. The paragraph has raised a counterargument, dealt with it, and moved on, and a reader finishes it believing the claim survived something. It did not. It was never under attack.

When it's fine

An objection that was already in the room deserves its answer. Paul Graham, writing about how to make an essay useful, stops to say you might think a sufficiently careful essay is safe from attack, and then grants it: that is sort of true, it is safe from valid attacks. Then he shows how thin the consolation is, because an idea stated as strongly as it can honestly be stated is the easiest kind to misrepresent. The doubt he names is the one his own argument has just planted in the reader. He is not knocking it down. He is paying it off.

Hamilton works under harder conditions and then refuses to finish the job. The first of the Federalist papers closes by granting that arguing for the Union may look unnecessary, since almost nobody says otherwise in public, and by naming what is being said in private: that the states are too large to govern as one country and would do better split apart. He does not answer that. He names it and promises the answer across the papers still to come, and those papers came. Mill answers a voice he never attributes, it will be said, and the voice turns out to be his own century congratulating itself on having stopped persecuting people. He meets it with prosecutions from his own decade, which a reader could go and look up.

Not one of the three names a single objector, and all three pass the test, because in every case a reader can go and find the belief being answered. Keep that condition. Raise the objection your reader is holding, state it as strongly as they would state it, and then pay for it.

Where it comes from

Rhetoric and logic have been arguing about this move under two names for a very long time, and the split is most of the lesson. Handled well it is procatalepsis, anticipation in the Greek, praesumptio in the older Latin handbooks, and the teachers who catalogued it treated it as a mark of fairness: name the objection first and you have shown your reader you are not hiding from it. Quintilian recommended it. Preachers built sermons on it. Lawyers still open with the other side's best argument, because the alternative is letting opposing counsel choose how it gets framed.

Handled badly it has a much older complaint standing against it. In 1724 Isaac Watts described opponents who dress up an adversary's opinion as they please and then triumph over the costume instead of the argument, which is the straw man in everything but the name; the name itself arrived far later. Both descriptions fit the same sentence, word for word. What separates them is never the wording. It is whether anybody actually holds the position being dressed.

Even the stock openers carry paper trails of their own. "Conventional wisdom" is usually traced to John Kenneth Galbraith's 1958 book "The Affluent Society," where it named the beliefs people accept mainly because accepting them is comfortable, a fairly pointed observation that the phrase itself now gets used to dodge.

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Written by a person

It may perhaps be thought superfluous to offer arguments to prove the utility of the UNION, a point, no doubt, deeply engraved on the hearts of the great body of the people in every State, and one, which it may be imagined, has no adversaries. But the fact is, that we already hear it whispered in the private circles of those who oppose the new Constitution, that the thirteen States are of too great extent for any general system, and that we must of necessity resort to separate confederacies of distinct portions of the whole.
Alexander Hamilton, "Federalist No. 1", 1787
It will be said, that we do not now put to death the introducers of new opinions: we are not like our fathers who slew the prophets, we even build sepulchres to them.
John Stuart Mill, "On Liberty," Chapter II, 1859
You might think that if you work sufficiently hard to ensure that an essay is correct, it will be invulnerable to attack. That's sort of true. It will be invulnerable to valid attacks. But in practice that's little consolation.
Paul Graham, "How to Write Usefully", 2020

Written by a model

It's tempting to think a forty-year-old marathoner is winding down. I ran my fastest half in March and I am still looking for someone to train with on Sundays.
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Conventional wisdom says a rail strike ends inside a week. This one entered its nineteenth day with no talks scheduled and no driver back at work.
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Further reading

  • Procatalepsis (Silva Rhetoricae) · Gideon Burton's standard reference for classical rhetoric, defining the device as answering an objection before it is raised and quoting Jonathan Swift's use of it in a satirical essay.
  • Straw Man (Wikipedia) · Traces the fallacy to Isaac Watts's 1724 description of opponents who dress up a position and then defeat the costume instead of the argument.
  • Conventional Wisdom (Wikipedia) · John Kenneth Galbraith is usually credited with the phrase from his 1958 book "The Affluent Society," where it named beliefs valued mainly for being easy to accept.