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the entire point is
Rhetorical termHorismusDefining a thing in one short clause, as if the question were now closed.
Sometimes a single sentence sums the whole of something into one finished definition. Read the paragraph above it: if the case is already made, the line is a summary, and if the case is missing, the wording is standing in for proof.
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The entire reason this place works is the staff, because the rooms themselves are tired and the breakfast is worse.
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Before
The entire reason the rollout stalled is trust.
After
Two of the three pilot teams quit the rollout after the March outage, and nobody has written down why.
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How to spot it
Read the paragraph above the sentence, not the sentence itself. The wording announces a finished argument: a totalizing word, a noun, then a bare verb of being carrying the whole load, as in "the entire point is trust" or "the entire reason the rollout stalled was timing." There is nothing wrong with either line on its own. Check whether the paragraphs above them did the work the wording says is already done.
So go back and look for the walk. A writer who has gone through the parts of a subject and found the same thing true of every part has bought the right to call the whole of it one thing, and the closing line is then a summary of something the reader has just watched happen. A writer who skipped that walk is asking for the conclusion on credit. Take the quantifier out and watch the temperature drop: "a reason the rollout stalled is timing" opens a conversation, while the totalizing version ends one before anybody else has spoken.
A second check settles the cases the first leaves open. Name one part of the subject the sentence does not cover. If a part comes to mind without effort, the claim was larger than the evidence behind it, and a small word is doing what an honest qualifier would have done in the open.
Why models overdo it
The last sentence of a generated paragraph goes to whatever usually comes next, and after a stretch of explanation that is a line with the cadence of a result. A totalizing opener supplies that cadence before the sentence has made its claim. It compresses without summarizing, because the quantifier stands in for the survey of the parts that would otherwise have to happen first, and nothing in the process that produced it was keeping track of whether that survey ever took place.
There is a second pull, and it has to do with choosing. A real summary has to decide which part of a subject matters most and then defend the choice against the parts it demoted. The totalizing form skips the defending by refusing to choose: it says everything about the subject points one way, which is a larger claim than the one a careful writer would make and, oddly, an easier one to produce.
Say a draft has described three unrelated delays in a rollout and closes by announcing that the entire reason the rollout stalled is trust. Every sentence in it reads well alone. The trouble is arithmetic: nothing above that closing line ever measured trust, and the closing line is the first place the word appears.
When it's fine
Plenty of subjects really do come down to one thing, and saying so plainly beats hedging around it for a paragraph. Chesterton is the clean case. He refuses the ordinary reason for travel and then gives his own, that the whole object of travel is at last to set foot on one's own country as a foreign land, and the sentence is total on purpose. It is also paid for. The speech around it argues that sleep and custom hide your own country until you leave it, so the line arrives as the end of a case rather than as a substitute for one.
Paul Graham closes on the same move. After walking through choosing a field, reaching the frontier, noticing the gaps in it and exploring them, and naming curiosity at each of those steps, he writes that the whole process is a kind of dance with curiosity. By then the sentence is a receipt. That is the standing rule for your own drafts: keep the line when you can point above it to the walk, and when you cannot, write the smaller sentence you are able to support. The smaller sentence is usually the better one anyway, and it survives a reader who checks.
Where it comes from
Rhetoricians called stating what a thing is in one clean stroke horismus. The word comes from the Greek for boundary, the root behind horizon, and Silva Rhetoricae glosses it as a clear, brief definition, often drawn by marking what sets a thing apart. A definition drawn well does work an argument would otherwise have to earn line by line, which is why statutes and textbooks lean on it. The maxim tradition supplies the other half of the modern habit. Latin handbooks filed that under sententia, one of several names for a short, pithy saying, and the Rhetorica ad Herennium treats it at 4.17.24. Put the two together and you get the shape in question: a boundary drawn in the cadence of settled wisdom.
For most of that history the form was expensive. A speaker who defined a thing in one stroke had to stand behind it in a room where people could answer back, and a writer who set a maxim in print knew the page would outlive the argument, so the sentence was usually the last thing written rather than the first. The cost of producing the cadence has since collapsed. It can now be had on demand, ahead of the argument it is supposed to conclude, which is why a reader has to look above the line instead of trusting its tone.
Side by side
Written by a person
The whole object of travel is not to set foot on foreign land; it is at last to set foot on one's own country as a foreign land.
The whole strength of England lies in the fact that the enormous majority of the English people are snobs.
The whole process is a kind of dance with curiosity.
Written by a model
The entire fight last night was about the dishes, which is not what either of us was actually upset about.
The entire point of this profile is to find someone who still reads on a Sunday morning.
Further reading
- Horismus — Silva Rhetoricae · The classical figure of terse definition this pattern descends from.
- Sententia — Silva Rhetoricae · The maxim family this construction borrows its cadence from.
- Politics and the English Language — George Orwell · On pretentious diction that lends a plain statement an air of scientific impartiality.